There you have it, fanged little trash monsters. hyperbeeb took one for the team, and reported back in one piece! From her commentary, I’d say few brain cells, if any, were sacrificed in the process.
(FYI that star is transparent, ENJOY)
Having read both blood vivicanti and my immortal, my immortal is worse for editing and continuity reasons but I give blood vivicanti points for actually being a published work and for having the dumbest original ideas. The elements in my immortal don’t work together but individually are plausible and fine. Can’t say that for the blood vivicanti the concept and every piece of universe building is bad from its very inception
I-want-my-IWTV 